Before correction
In my opinion, I think one of the reasons why Japan has unique culture in the world is involved with the fact that Japan has never been conquered by any other country so far.
This fact is due to the location where Japan is in the world and some historical accidents that are the closed nation called SAKOKU and the failure to invade Japan by Kublai Khan because of sudden storm and so on.
For that, the culture of Japan has rarely been affected by any other country, and it had grown gradually, and finally it became unique.
After correction
In my opinion, I think one of the reasons why Japan has such a unique culture is related to the fact that Japan has never been conquered by any other country.
This is due to the geographical location of Japan and some historical events such as SAKOKU when Japan cut off all ties with the outside world and Kublai Khan's failed attempt to invade Japan.
For these reasons, Japanese culture has received little influence by other countries, and has developed gradually into its unique identity today.
【CAUTION】
1. ”such a” is correct, not “such an”
2. “so far” in 2nd line in 1st paragraph before collecting, implies that there is a possibility in the future.
【Idiom】
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6 件のコメント:
久しぶりに来たよ。
日本の文化の独自性は地域性と鎖国の歴史によるものであるという。
中国とか媒介としての朝鮮の影響も多く受けているから、そんなに独特かなぁ。
ESL Podcastやってたんだね。現在、一年分くらい貯めていて、なかなか追いつけないという悲惨な状態です。
んじゃ、飲みに行くときは誘ってね。
お、※サンクス。
今Finding Japanなる英文書を読んでて、
それのchapter毎の要約and感想として、
↑の日記書いたから、そんなに深い意見ってわけじゃないんだ。スマン。
目的はwriting力を高めるためだからね。
とはいえ、意見もらえるのは正直に嬉しいわ。
欲を言えば、※が英語だとなお嬉しい。
飲みに関して。
N沢と連絡取ったんだけど、
あいつが次回帰ってくる日がゴールデンウィークなんで、
う~む…どうしようかと、現在思案中。。。
もちろん、開催するときは呼びますぜぃ。
アルコウ会のたくまです。久し振り。
これ、英語の添削とかって誰かにやってもらってるの??
なんかめっちゃ厳しいねw添削w
どもです~。
英語の添削はネイティブにやってもらいました。
一応厳しく添削するように頼んであるので、
今の自分のwriting能力を考えると
まぁ必然的にこんな結果になるって感じですね。
orz
Japan certainly got uniqueness. But it was a little biased one, I think.
To amano-kun
Thanks for your comment!
I think that's very interesting point of view.
But if it's true, I wonder when and how or... why was it come out.
Do you know of that?
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